This was our last take. I think our performance can be improved by phrasing the lyrics more like John Lennon did on the original recording. It sounds very stiff here. There are places too where there are accents on some of the lyrics "Upstairs and had a smoke" for example. I also think that by opening the piece with a solo voice instead of the full chorus might allow the piece to expand more dramatically. The maracas have got to be spot on in the beginning, and I think we have resolved the last chord issue with the new chord (not appearing here).