This sounds good to me. Just a few tweaks:
The band needs to clean up the ensemble solo section just after "may I introduce to you...", (We've been working on it for some time, and it's getting there.)
No timpani rolls in the chorus.
I'd like to have a vocal soloist perform the opening line, then ensemble play the interlude (cleanly), then have the full chorus come in on "We're Sgt' Pepper's Lonely...".
Harmony in the voices on "we're Sgt. Pepper's Lonely". I'm only hearing the top note.