The only thing that really sticks out on this one is the absence of the background vocals. They shouldn't be too hard to throw in though, so I think this is going to be one of our stronger numbers. As always, let's try to keep the phrasing as close to the original recording as possible.
I'm going to use a keyboard patch to add the tamboura sound in the "I used to be cruel" section.
Good job. This tune really grooves.