This is one of my favorites. I love the way it builds from the verse to the chorus.
The only thing I think we need to address is a bit of the phrasing in the voices. "Tangerine trees" "Somebody calls you" "Bridge by a fountain" "Drift past the flowers", "train in a station" etc. all have slightly different rhythms to them, and they seem to roll off Lennon's tongue on the recording. We seem to be a little stiff.